Passion (prompt)

With her beautiful labradorite blue eyes, Dina looked straight at him and said in a stable voice, ‘ If you really want to marry me, you will have to get a proper job. I want a stable source of income.’

He and Dina were in a relationship for three years now and an intense passion had grown between them, for which he was ready to do everything.That passion for his lady love did get him a job, but supressed his love for his palette and brushes and killed his dream of colours.

Written for Five Sentence Story Prompt Challenge at http://wp.me/p7yZcU-8p

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41 Comments Add yours

  1. Afzal Moolla says:

    as always great stuff!

    Peace ✌

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    1. Less dark though πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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      1. Afzal Moolla says:

        most definitely 😁

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      2. πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
        Peace ✌

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    1. Nope, it’s a prompt…. Weekly five sentences prompt….. I’m gonna keep writing dark stuff πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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  2. Orange says:

    Very well written πŸ‘Œ

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  3. magarisa says:

    When the passion between them wanes, he’s probably going to resent her for ‘forcing’ him to give up his pursuit of art.
    Nicely written!

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    1. Thanks. Ya, it’s supposed to go like that because love is more than passion ever will be….. Sadly, it was a five sentence prompt

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      1. magarisa says:

        You packed a lot into five sentences. 😊

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      2. Tried my best to sum up the emotions. And also tried not to make the sentences too long and boring

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  4. Kaycee says:

    Lol . that struck me. At least you didn’t give me heart attack this time. At least I didn’t end up like this😨😨😨

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    1. Is this one bad? Be honest

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      1. Kaycee says:

        No. It’s just weird

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      2. Good weird or bad weird?

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      3. Kaycee says:

        Good weird. God u are an amazing writer.

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      4. Thanks a lot bro. And so are you.

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      5. Kaycee says:

        πŸ˜€πŸ˜€

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      6. 😁😁

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  5. Kaycee says:

    Greatly written my friend

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  6. Kaycee says:

    So u are a girl @ veiled facet. Thought u to be a guy

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    1. Hehe, ya, I’m a girl πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜Ž

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  7. Kaycee says:

    If that’s the case then you remind me of a Nigerian singer ASA. You and her have a lot in common only that she’s a singer, not a writer.
    I know you wish you were a guy

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    1. Why do you wish so? And what’s common between me and ASA?

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      1. Kaycee says:

        You and her behave like guys. The ASA even dresses like guys. I’m just saying. I mean am kind of shocked out finding out that you are a girl.
        The way you always replied ” Thanks bro” whenever I commented on your post sounded so manly. Even your stories is so manly. I’ m just saying. Sorry if I was rude or something. I’m feeling all weird right now as I type this

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      2. It’s alright. It doesn’t even matter about gender and age. It never was about these two. Ya, I can understand your shock, but it’s ok. Ya, my stories are maybe dark, but I don’t know if they are many

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      3. Kaycee says:

        You always make me look like this😨😨😨

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      4. I’m happy that I do πŸ˜‚

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      5. Hey, just to assure you, it’s completely ok if you are shocked. The point is, these days, gender doesn’t really matter and I’m really glad to hear that I could shock you again. And I liked ASA. See you later bro πŸ˜ƒ…. Keep calling me bro. It does matter

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  8. Kaycee says:

    So u are mad at me??

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    1. No, I’m not mad. It’s just that I am amused. How did you find out I’m a girl?

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      1. Kaycee says:

        From one of the comments on your blog

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    1. Thanks a lot πŸ˜ƒ

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  9. Ruthie Rose says:

    I loved this! Really great piece πŸ™‚

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    1. Thanks a ton. I’ll go and check your blog out

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